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All About The Water Cycle

The water cycle has 3 stages and Im go to talk about the water cycle I’m go to talk about rain,snow and fog.

First I’m go to talk about is evaporation,is the first thing to happened in the water cycle it process
the sun and hotter more evaporation.

The second on the list is condensation is when evaporation goes up and turns into the cloud.

precipitation  it is went the cloud get to full of water then it come down .

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