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Wednesday, November 21, 2018

Happier

Today task was write about a song and we had to do first person it was abit hard but I did it  was a sad song but a good I hope we can do this soon then.

I  sat down at my birthday party looking at my birthday cake the candles were lit then a boy blow candles out I got upset it was gift time and my first gift was a little bow after I open it  a dog walk thorough with my uncle  I got really happy.

Then we took a photo he become my best friend we went to the park and much more one day after I had football and no one pick me to be in there team  because of the way I look I got really upset and run home we I got my best friend was sitting at the door I let him in and I play football with him .

then one day I got home and my best friend didn't want to ply with me he want to sleep then one after school I got him was on the ground and my uncle come in and we took him to the vet and he had to get put down I got really sad.

I watch him go it to the room (years later) it was my kid birthday she got a a little bow i upset and happy because i know what going to happen my uncle got a bog for her she was so happy we took a photo of her and her dog and we play with he become my and her best friend.   

what do you think?- I think is was good it show what happens in life and it was really sad. did you like this task?- I really like it i hope we did soon.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Kortney!

    I am so impressed with your work today. You wrote a lovely piece that really tells us what happened in the music video. I like how you commented on the fact that the dog was her best friend and how when you came home 'my best friend didn't want to play with me'. That was a beautiful sentence that stood out to me.

    Well done on this task!
    - Miss Birtch

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