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Monday, May 28, 2018

Volcanoes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hi guys this is a video about volcanoes we have to make a video and Me and Lucy made this video
and hope you enjoy
If you want to you can gave me feedback😃

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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 29, 2018 at 6:40 PM

    Hi Kortney. I like how you and Lucy tried out Stop Motion to create this DLO explaining about volcanoes. Did you use this tool last year?

    A suggestion for next time would be to slow down the transitions between each piece and record for longer so that we have time to finish reading all of your information. Towards the end it became very speedy and was hard to keep up with the text you were adding!

    - Miss Birtch

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  2. AnonymousMay 31, 2018 at 2:48 PM

    I like you video it was cool your good videoing kortney

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  3. AnonymousMay 31, 2018 at 10:18 PM

    Hi Tyra! This is really great feedback for your classmate. I appreciate how you were thoughtful and helpful with your suggestions. Great job!
    - Miss Birtch

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  4. AnonymousMay 31, 2018 at 10:18 PM

    Great feedback for next time Aiden. You offered your suggestion in a positive and thoughtful way. Excellent job with your comment!
    - Miss Birtch

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