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Friday, September 9, 2016

The nightmare in space

W.A.L.T: writing a narrative
I tried my personal best. Next time I'll write more. What is it about? It is about a chimp who goes to space because the humans sent him. We have been working on this piece of writing  of 5 weeks. Please leave a Comment
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  1. UnknownSeptember 9, 2016 at 2:06 PM

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  2. UnknownSeptember 12, 2016 at 11:02 AM

    Hi kortney I like reading your story you need to put were wow words. You should read it be for you published. How long did it take you to writ it?

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  3. UnknownSeptember 14, 2016 at 9:24 AM

    Great story but the first page of writing I could not breath it was to long and I only saw two full stop's.

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