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Showing posts with label term 2 2016. Show all posts
Showing posts with label term 2 2016. Show all posts

Friday, July 1, 2016

Killer whales tail

 In my class we have been looking at animal's adaptation.  I chose a killer whales tail because I wanted  to know  more about them.  Here is  my  animals adaptation.
This is adaptation of killer whale tail facts
  1: killer whales hit the other fish with their tail    
 2: killer whales communicate by  using their tails with other killer whales  
3: killer whales tail  can make 2 waves at the same time. 

    


Friday, June 3, 2016

Dolphin Facts

W.A.L.T read information about animals and find the key facts.

Tuesday, May 24, 2016

The worst day ever (First Draft)

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.
Success Criteria
  • I will describe an event or series of events in chronological order.  
  • My writing will be about a main idea and have a focused purpose.
  • I will provide information about who, what, when, where, why, and how the event happened.
  • My recount will show how I have reflected on personal experience.  
  • I will include details that describe how I felt and what I thought.
  • I will describe the event using my five senses.
First draft
            The worst Day ever

It’s a beautiful day in December in  south Africa I am out walk with my family  the sun is shining around  the river  is in south Africa    I am Happy. I am look for some food and water. We are stop for a  drink . aI feeting safe around my dad  he is the Lull for   hard  ofor buffalos and my mum is the over Lull of the hard for buffalos . Then we stop for a sit time because we get seol leg’s.

I was walking along the river  bank , I saw dad stop  in his tracks, I smell danger in the air Then I saw a pride of lions ,then my dad  said  run.  So we run  and the lion’s were running after me . The lions got  me and I lose control  then I fall in the then water  I  with a big splash   I am  feeling sracy .Then the lions are pull me out of the water . Then the crocodile  snap  my  tile  the lions  and crocodile  are have I tug war over me . Then the lions start eat  me  then I hear a big scream  then I saw the hard of buffalos.  Then my family safe me be by pocket   the lion's .  At last I am back with my family  and I am feeling  good .