That is really good Kortney I like how you done your title. Get your seatbelts on because it is a good phrase but maybe you can go look at your title because you said (my worst bay ever) and I think your meant to say my worst day ever.
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Well Done Kortney keep The good work up I like how you chose on google
ReplyDeleteslides and the presentation is great.
That is really good Kortney I like how you done your title. Get your seatbelts on because it is a good phrase but maybe you can go look at your title because you said (my worst bay ever) and I think your meant to say my worst day ever.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Milan frome Gilberthorpe school that was really good it felt like it was real. I freaked out and I almost panked. Good job :)
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Milan frome Gilberthorpe school that was really good it felt like it was real. I freaked out and I almost panked. Good job :)
ReplyDeleteHi Kortney I liked your story but I think you could fix some words in your story I like how you talked about you first then the lion.
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