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Friday, June 10, 2016

My worst day ever

5 comments:

  1. Well Done Kortney keep The good work up I like how you chose on google
    slides and the presentation is great.

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  2. That is really good Kortney I like how you done your title. Get your seatbelts on because it is a good phrase but maybe you can go look at your title because you said (my worst bay ever) and I think your meant to say my worst day ever.

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  3. Hi my name is Milan frome Gilberthorpe school that was really good it felt like it was real. I freaked out and I almost panked. Good job :)

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  4. Hi my name is Milan frome Gilberthorpe school that was really good it felt like it was real. I freaked out and I almost panked. Good job :)

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  5. Hi Kortney I liked your story but I think you could fix some words in your story I like how you talked about you first then the lion.

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