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Monday, June 11, 2018

Dance ????????


This is my dance research about Parris goebel above this is the sideshow

if you want to you can gave me feedback 

2 comments:

  1. Hi Kortney! I really liked looking at your slideshow! Did you work on this by yourself, or did you have a partner? I can see the hard work you have been putting into the research on Parris over the last few weeks because your slides have a lot of interesting information.
    This is showing Year 8 quality work!
    - Miss Birtch

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  2. Hi Kortney,
    Lucy here I am just saying next time I would check my spelling on the last sentence. and with your titles make sure they are not all with question marks with your cause some people will not stop and read it could be something like.
    Dance Time With Kortney

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