Hi Kortney! I really liked looking at your slideshow! Did you work on this by yourself, or did you have a partner? I can see the hard work you have been putting into the research on Parris over the last few weeks because your slides have a lot of interesting information. This is showing Year 8 quality work! - Miss Birtch
Hi Kortney, Lucy here I am just saying next time I would check my spelling on the last sentence. and with your titles make sure they are not all with question marks with your cause some people will not stop and read it could be something like. Dance Time With Kortney
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Hi Kortney! I really liked looking at your slideshow! Did you work on this by yourself, or did you have a partner? I can see the hard work you have been putting into the research on Parris over the last few weeks because your slides have a lot of interesting information.
ReplyDeleteThis is showing Year 8 quality work!
- Miss Birtch
Hi Kortney,
ReplyDeleteLucy here I am just saying next time I would check my spelling on the last sentence. and with your titles make sure they are not all with question marks with your cause some people will not stop and read it could be something like.
Dance Time With Kortney