The pet I think is best for a class room is a goldfish there are $7 each fish I think it is the best because.....
it can't run thought the doors and go outside without us and run away and it is easy to look after it I know how to look after one.
Ello Kortney I liked your DlO about fish and how to take care of it I also liked how you told us how to feed a fish. Maybe you could add some punctuation next time?
I really like the DLO that you and Lucy created! It has all of the necessary information included such as your financial literacy terms, your cost break down and the explanation of the task.
I am very impressed with this work. For next time, be sure to proofread your work together to catch any mistakes.
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DeleteEllo Kortney
I liked your DlO about fish and how to take care of it
I also liked how you told us how to feed a fish.
Maybe you could add some punctuation next time?
Hi Kortney
ReplyDeleteI really like the DLO that you and Lucy created! It has all of the necessary information included such as your financial literacy terms, your cost break down and the explanation of the task.
I am very impressed with this work. For next time, be sure to proofread your work together to catch any mistakes.
- Miss Birtch