W.A.L.T recall events through the eyes of an animal.
Success Criteria
- I will describe an event or series of events in chronological order.
- My writing will be about a main idea and have a focused purpose.
- I will provide information about who, what, when, where, why, and how the event happened.
- My recount will show how I have reflected on personal experience.
- I will include details that describe how I felt and what I thought.
- I will describe the event using my five senses.
First draft
The worst Day ever
It’s a beautiful day in December in south Africa I am out walk with my family the sun is shining around the river is in south Africa I am Happy. I am look for some food and water. We are stop for a drink . aI feeting safe around my dad he is the Lull for hard ofor buffalos and my mum is the over Lull of the hard for buffalos . Then we stop for a sit time because we get seol leg’s.
I was walking along the river bank , I saw dad stop in his tracks, I smell danger in the air Then I saw a pride of lions ,then my dad said run. So we run and the lion’s were running after me . The lions got me and I lose control then I fall in the then water I with a big splash I am feeling sracy .Then the lions are pull me out of the water . Then the crocodile snap my tile the lions and crocodile are have I tug war over me . Then the lions start eat me then I hear a big scream then I saw the hard of buffalos. Then my family safe me be by pocket the lion's . At last I am back with my family and I am feeling good .