My Movie

In the past few weeks my group have been working on our movie  call Evil Zombies Teachers. on the 2nd of September 2016  we are having a film festival . We have been  working very hard towards are movie making.  it has taken 2 days to make it. The people I have been working with are Hope, Alexis, Addyson and Danielle. After Thursday we are aloud to put our finished movie on are blog . 

 It was hard to make it but it was easy to film the movie  Can you lave a comment?

 

The nightmare in space

W.A.L.T: writing a narrative

I tried my personal best. Next time I'll write more. What is it about? It is about a chimp who goes to space because the humans sent him. We have been working on this piece of writing  of 5 weeks. Please leave a Comment

Here is a link to the video   

It’s not a Planet, it’s

our home.

The nightmare in space

W.A.L.T write a narrative.

The nightmare in  space   

In 1961 a chimp named Max got trained and he was getting ready to go into space the next day. Max got launched into space because the human wanted  to see how long a chimp can stay in space for. It was safer than sending a human.

Max  was asleep  for 65 years. Max woke up to see the photo of his trainer and he didn't remember where he was .

Then  he went back to sleep and then Max  woke up and saw milky way the color was Gloomy  Bright light green ,red and yellow  it was very pretty .

Green and blue then I think it was earth it is earth .

Then I think  to himself it earth and grinned then thought to himself, “I am go back to home to see my family. Max is  like a human because  Max does human stuff  and I was alone in the rock.

Max push the something then the rock went the wrong way but Max not known he went the wrong way then the rock went into the shaking then he push the same thing was   he push it then the rock landing then Max look around and  saw no one they then he think I went go the wrong way.

The dirt was still  so l couldn't see what I was do  then I said Jeff where are you I miss you please come out wherever you are it is me max.

Then I  go to town and  keep run and  run until I see something it look like a hospital I went to it then I saw people then I saw Jeff  in bed  I couldn't believe went I am see right now is this true “but Jeff are you hurt” “max am oh okay what about you” “I okay thanks.

Then I went back to the other chimps and then see family waiting there for me so they  could gave me a huge then there  say I miss you max   I went in to where the food was then I see delicious food but who was the food for me and my family or other chimp’s but I onlong saw my family then a bed get  take to another room was that Jeff.

Then I say this can’t be true I closed my eyes then open my eyes it was a dream it turn.

Jeff Jeff what are you do to Jeff please don’t hurt him.Sorry they was war and Jeff got very very hurt.

Then Max went to my family and Max said “did you got hurt”no we didn’t because Jeff was take care of us”. That had he got hurt bey be back. “Jeff you were take care of family that had you get hurt is it”.”Yes I didn’t know how to tell you Max”.”Oh okay”. I close my eyes then I opened my eyes it was all fake.  

first draft for my space chimp here is a link for what am writing
I hope you enjoy this please Comment on my blog thank you.

It’s not a Planet, it’s

our home.

The nightmare in space

W.A.L.T write a narrative

The nightmare in  space   

In 1961 a chimp named Max got trained and he was getting ready to go into space the next day. Max got launched into space because the human wanted  to see how long a chimp can stay in space for. It was safer than sending a human.

Max  was asleep  for 65 years. Max woke up to see the photo of his trainer and he didn't remember where he was .

Then  he went back to sleep and then Max  woke up and saw milky way the color was Gloomy  Bright light green ,red and yellow  it was very pretty .

green and blue then I think it was earth it is earth .

then I think  to himself it earth and grinned then thought to himself, “I am go back to home to see my family. Max is  like a human because  Max does human stuff  and I was alone in the rock.

Max push the something then the rock went the wrong way but Max not known he went the wrong way then the rock went into the shaking then he push the same thing was   he push it then the rock landing then Max look around and  saw no one they then he think I went go the wrong way.

The dirt was still  so l couldn't see what I was do  then I said Jeff where are you I miss you please come out wherever you are it is me max.

Then I  go to town and  keep run and  run until I see something it look like a hospital I went to it then I saw people then I saw Jeff  in bed  I couldn't believe went I am see right now is this true “but Jeff are you hurt” “max am oh okay what about you” “I okay thanks.

then I went back to the other chimps and then see family waiting there for me so they  could gave me a huge then there  say I miss you max   I went in to where the food was then I see delicious food but who was the food for me and my family or other chimp’s but I onlong saw my family then a bed get  take to another room was that Jeff.

Then I say this can’t be true I closed my eyes then open my eyes it was a dream it turn.

Jeff Jeff what are you do to Jeff please don’t hurt him.sorry they was war and Jeff got very very hurt.

Then Max went to my family and Max said “did you got hurt”no we didn’t because Jeff was take care of us”. That had he got hurt bey be back. “Jeff you were take care of family that had you get hurt is it”.”yes I didn’t know how to tell you Max”.”oh okay”. I close my eyes then I opened my eyes it was all fake.  

first draft for my space chimp here is a link for what am writing
I hope you enjoy this please Comment on my blog thank you.

It’s not a Planet, it’s

our home.