and hope you enjoy
If you want to you can gave me feedback😃
Monday, May 28, 2018
Volcanoes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Hi guys this is a video about volcanoes we have to make a video and Me and Lucy made this video
and hope you enjoy
If you want to you can gave me feedback😃
and hope you enjoy
If you want to you can gave me feedback😃
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Hi Kortney. I like how you and Lucy tried out Stop Motion to create this DLO explaining about volcanoes. Did you use this tool last year?
ReplyDeleteA suggestion for next time would be to slow down the transitions between each piece and record for longer so that we have time to finish reading all of your information. Towards the end it became very speedy and was hard to keep up with the text you were adding!
- Miss Birtch
Hi I like how you presented it, maybe next time when using stop motion take more pictures because I need to pause it to read it I would love to see you to do a screencastify!
ReplyDeleteHi Tyra! This is really great feedback for your classmate. I appreciate how you were thoughtful and helpful with your suggestions. Great job!
Delete- Miss Birtch
Awesome video! I like how u chose a different way to present your topic video. maybe next time you could keep the camera in one place so then it isn't all over the place and so then it is easier to see.
ReplyDeleteGreat feedback for next time Aiden. You offered your suggestion in a positive and thoughtful way. Excellent job with your comment!
Delete- Miss Birtch
I like you video it was cool your good videoing kortney
ReplyDeleteHi! I like how you used this app. Maybe next time you could slow it down a bit. otherwise you did great!.
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