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Monday, April 30, 2018

This photo is what I did in the holidays I had to make some thing what i make this toondoo and you can do more stuff.
it is so fun to make you can do more stuff I hope you enjoy.
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Thursday, April 12, 2018

♥️My Kete♥️

Here is my Kete Me, Michael and Austin want we had to do
 we to choose 3 activity to do 
and put it to too together have is it i  didn't get my 3 activity
 I got 1  activity on but enjoy which this.

I hope you like this sideshow.




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My recount writing

Here is my recount writing  it is about my recount writing My brother birthday.  

It is im best work so far hope you enjoy it read it

My brother birthday

On the 5th of october it was my brother birthday the people who come to my brother birthday Me,Mum,Jay,Ben and Tyran. We went to 3 different places, Macdonalds, the skate park and another park.

the first thing that we did was go to McDonald for lunch what i have at  McDonald I had a cheese burger and chips and then we play on the playground for a bit.It was full of little kids which was boring, but we could run around and play tag.
After we went to mcdonalds we went home to chill and had a cake and we had to go out. I can’t really remember what the cake was like, but I know I liked it.

Later that day went to a stake park in Riccarton. It is just a park where you can skate.  At the stake park we watched my brothers do stuff there. They were doing scooter tricks, they were pretty good at doing the tricks.  Me Mum and Jay were joking around, telling jokes and laughing at my brother falling of his scooter. He kept doing tricks and falling which made us laugh as he kept saying “that was a mean trick”.

Then we went to another park. This one had a stake park too, but was smaller than the other one as it had another playground in it. Then we went on the playground, I went on it this time. We stayed there for a bit and then went home and chilled.  

That was all we did for my brothers birthday. It was a fun day he enjoyed it because he got to go to the skate park, so he was happy.


Reflection:
I think that I created an interesting piece of writing because…I write a good story
For next time I could spend more time on…the ening

In my writing, I would like to improve...more wow words

I hope you enjoy my recount writing

can you please lave a comment

Bye now 😊


Wednesday, April 11, 2018

my writing

My brother birthday!!!

On the 5th of October it was my brother birthday the people who come to my brother birthday Me,Mum,Jay,Ben and Tyran. We went to 3 different places, MacDonald, the skate park and another park.

We got home for Auckland it was my brother birthday the first thing that we did was go to McDonald for lunch what i have at  McDonald I had a cheese burger and chips and then we play on the playground for a bit.It was full of little kids which was boring, but we could run around and play tag.
After we went to mcdonalds we went home to chill and had a cake and we had to go out. I can’t really remember what the cake was like, but I know I liked it.

Later that day went to a stake park in Riccarton. It is just a park where you can skate.  At the stake park we watched my brothers do stuff there. They were doing scooter tricks, they were pretty good at doing the tricks.  Me Mum and Jay were joking around, telling jokes and laughing at my brother falling of his scooter. He kept doing tricks and falling which made us laugh as he kept saying “that was a mean trick”.

Then we went to another park. This one had a stake park too, but was smaller than the other one as it had another playground in it. Then we went on the playground, I went on it this time. We stayed there for a bit and then went home and chilled.  

That was all we did for my brothers birthday. It was a fun day he enjoyed it because he got to go to the skate park, so he was happy.


Reflection:
I think that I created an interesting piece of writing because…I write a good story
For next time I could spend more time on…the ening

In my writing, I would like to improve...my wow words

Tuesday, April 10, 2018

Musial theatre

Today we are go to sing over and over I am shy to be it tomorrow and we show what we are do in front of year 7 and 8 and 9's  im sing tin the big group is my song we are singing 

here is the song we known the way 


Tatou o tagata folau e vala’auina
E le atua o le sami tele e o mai
Ia ava’e le lu’itau e lelei
Tapenapena
Aue, aue 
Nuku I mua
Te manulele e tataki e
Aue, aue
Te fenua, te malie,
Nae ko hakilia mo kaiga e
We read the wind and the sky
When the sun is high
We sail the length of sea
On the ocean breeze
At night we name every star
We know where we are
We know who we are, who we are
Aue, aue,
We set a course to find
A brand new island everywhere we row
Aue, aue,
We keep our island in our mind
And when it’s time to find home
We know the way
Aue, aue, we are explorers reading every sign
We tell the stories of our elders
In the never ending chain
Aue, aue
Te fenua, te mālie
Nā heko hakilia
We know the way

I hope you like it and plz gave me feedback