The worst day ever (First Draft)

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

• I will describe an event or series of events in chronological order.  
• My writing will be about a main idea and have a focused purpose.
• I will provide information about who, what, when, where, why, and how the event happened.
• My recount will show how I have reflected on personal experience.  
• I will include details that describe how I felt and what I thought.
• I will describe the event using my five senses.

First draft

            The worst Day ever

It’s a beautiful day in December in  south Africa I am out walk with my family  the sun is shining around  the river  is in south Africa    I am Happy. I am look for some food and water. We are stop for a  drink . aI feeting safe around my dad  he is the Lull for   hard  ofor buffalos and my mum is the over Lull of the hard for buffalos . Then we stop for a sit time because we get seol leg’s.

I was walking along the river  bank , I saw dad stop  in his tracks, I smell danger in the air Then I saw a pride of lions ,then my dad  said  run.  So we run  and the lion’s were running after me . The lions got  me and I lose control  then I fall in the then water  I  with a big splash   I am  feeling sracy .Then the lions are pull me out of the water . Then the crocodile  snap  my  tile  the lions  and crocodile  are have I tug war over me . Then the lions start eat  me  then I hear a big scream  then I saw the hard of buffalos.  Then my family safe me be by pocket   the lion's .  At last I am back with my family  and I am feeling  good .

Kortney's Learning Goals.

Kortney's Animal Creator.

The animal you will see is the mixture of lots of animals.

                                         Tigchygfin

Head: tiger

Their night vision is six times stronger than humans.  If you look a tigchygfin  in the eyes he is less likely to kill you tigchygfin  prefer to hunt by ambush, so by looking a tigchygfin  in the eyes you are showing him you know he is there. Now he has lost the element of surprise, and will most likely go find something else to feast on. Because of this, men in India often wear masks on the back of their head with a second face.  The white spot on the back of their ears is called an ocelli The tigchygfin  tongue is covered with numerous small, sharp, rear-facing projections called papillae. These papillae gives the tongue is rough, rasping texture and is designed to help strip the skin, feathers, fur and meat right off its prey. They have been known to lick the paint right off the walls of their enclosures in the zoo.

Tigchygfin  are solitary animals, and it actually fairly rare to see them group together in the wild. The exception to this, of course, is a mother and her cubs Unlike lions, who would fight to the death over a kill, when a tiger crosses paths with another tigchygfin  while hunting, they often share the meal together. Also, when several tigchygfin  are present at a kill, the males will wait for females and cubs to eat first, again, unlike lions, which do the opposite. Tigchygfin  rarely argue or fight over a kill and simply wait turns.

Leg:  giraffe

They use their long legs to kick their predators. Their legs can reach 1.8 metres long. They can run as fast as 35 miles an hour over short distances, or cruise at 10 mph over longer distances Giraffes spend most of their lives standing up; they even sleep and give birth standing up

Tail: fish.this  is the fast that my tigchygfin  can  I seriously question the speeds often given for any fish, especially when Wikipedia and some reputable some encyclopaedias claim that sailfish are supposed to be the fastest fish and can hit 60 miles per hour.

Diet:  Their wild deer and wild cattle called gaur, also buffalo, young elephants, monkeys, birds, frogs, and porcupines fish.

Habitat:  live in Asia, specifically throughout South east Asia, China, Korea and Russia. Tigers like to live in swamps, grasslands,and rainforests. Usually where Tigers live there are trees, bushes, and clumps of tall grass.

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